I’ve been a bit wrapped up with things…..and in the process the poem has been left behind.
So an ode to all things start-up- the forays, the delays…..
You were better off not
Now you have climbed into the sun
Just a bit and burnt! Crisp.
Smiles can hide dents,
but serves you right
For ignoring me
Can you write a word now?
So full of networking you…
Can you be honest again
And natural
Like a bird wrapped up by the sky
Or a dew drop practising its final fall?
© neelthemuse,2013
simon7banks
February 21, 2013 at 4:38 pm
The final line is particularly powerful, but I liked all the unexpected images.
Deborah
February 22, 2013 at 12:29 am
a shining example of a well written poem.
neelthemuse
February 22, 2013 at 4:29 am
Thank you Simon!
neelthemuse
February 22, 2013 at 4:30 am
Thank you Deborah!
Claire 'Word by Word'
February 22, 2013 at 10:01 am
Beware Icarus!