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Saturday Short

27 Aug

On Saturdays will shrink the thought process a bit….

Wrote this one in response to another poem featured on Guardian……you must read the poem if you ask me……

Age
The Last Page.
Blast it!
My cataract.

 

 

 

 

© 2011 by neelthemuse

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2 Comments

Posted by on August 27, 2011 in Day to day

 

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2 responses to “Saturday Short

  1. Rahul

    August 29, 2011 at 6:33 am

    Checked the original poem, found it closer to prose and too long. Your lines are just the opposite 🙂 Interesting.

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  2. neelthemuse

    August 29, 2011 at 8:23 am

    Thanks Rahul for carefully reading the poems….appreciate it!

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