Hike Haiku

17 Sep

Up the prices go……so was wondering from the time I woke up, how do I squeeze that into seventeen syllables?


Roll back petrol

To the prehistoric  squeeze.

For now, raw food diet!




© neelthemuse,2011


Posted by on September 17, 2011 in Day to day


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2 responses to “Hike Haiku

  1. poetrydiary

    September 18, 2011 at 9:40 am

    “Pre-historic squeeze” – a good line. Although I have heard those times were often quite relaxing to those alive then (who knows…..!?). I’d certainly have more excuse for missing a deadline if it took two weeks to travel to the nearest town. Nice haiku though.


  2. neelthemuse

    September 19, 2011 at 4:18 pm




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