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Light

30 Sep

This poem is the beginning of a much longer idea…..about what light really signifies.

What started out as

light

Falling on fields

Bursting  through cloud,

Seeping

Earth, earthworms, minerals, the underbelly,

Life creeping out , birthing pangs, graveyard growing,

What pain breeds

What joy!

© neelthemuse,2011

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4 Comments

Posted by on September 30, 2011 in Day to day

 

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4 responses to “Light

  1. simon7banks

    September 30, 2011 at 1:51 pm

    LIfe, death, rebirth.

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  2. brokenpenwriter

    September 30, 2011 at 4:17 pm

    In just a few words you captured the cycle – nicely done!

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  3. neelthemuse

    October 1, 2011 at 9:44 am

    Thank you…..the larger meaning of the poem however took me to the vortex of the cycle…..

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  4. Susie Clevenger

    October 2, 2011 at 7:41 pm

    Nice write on the evolution of life,but not only in the physical sense, but the spiritual as well…..

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