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November

07 Nov

Come.

Now?

Clarity you ducked me thirty years,

How much further? The year ends,

Time flies, carpe diem, so much to do, so much to prove,

And now? you show me the parallel line to perspective’s

Vanishing point?

Look at the clouds then. Follow them.

© neelthemuse,2011

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Posted by on November 7, 2011 in Day to day

 

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12 responses to “November

  1. Morning

    November 7, 2011 at 2:41 pm

    love the last three lines, well done.

    🙂

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  2. Tino

    November 7, 2011 at 3:32 pm

    It is sometimes difficult, when you know nothing of a poet, to interpret what they write. This is the case here for me, sadly.

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  3. Evelyn

    November 7, 2011 at 4:05 pm

    “And now? you show me the parallel line to perspective’s

    Vanishing point?

    Look at the clouds then. Follow them.”
    gosh, this is just fantastic…

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  4. neelthemuse

    November 7, 2011 at 4:29 pm

    Thank you for stopping by……glad you enjoyed the poem!

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  5. neelthemuse

    November 7, 2011 at 4:31 pm

    Thank you for the feedback Tino…..

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  6. neelthemuse

    November 7, 2011 at 4:31 pm

    Glad you liked it Evelyn….Buddha sure rocks:)

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  7. Mohana

    November 7, 2011 at 5:44 pm

    Well done!

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  8. liv2write2day

    November 7, 2011 at 6:31 pm

    This absolutely reflects the way I feel about November. Great photo, as well. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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  9. neelthemuse

    November 8, 2011 at 4:21 am

    Thank yo so much! Enjoyed doing your challenge….

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  10. neelthemuse

    November 8, 2011 at 4:22 am

    Thank you Mohana…..glad you stopped by!

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  11. Caddo Veil

    November 14, 2011 at 12:37 am

    Oh, this is so good I don’t know whether to laugh or cry!

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  12. neelthemuse

    November 14, 2011 at 6:37 am

    Thank you for that uplifting comment Caddo!

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