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Jilted

09 Dec

Fun dVerse challenge, this one!

photo couretsey: Eric

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Congratulations! My  web to yours

Professional handshake. On the  firework night remember the squeeze?

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Here is your wedding gift. I don’t like her by the way,

That woman by your side; you don’t match one bit.

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Have a happy married life! Cliché saves the day,

If one of us is happy, surely the other will darken as night.

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Say cheese for a photo! I see you for the first time,

Love the four lettered for what it is-

Donkey’s ears.

© neelthemuse,2011

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13 Comments

Posted by on December 9, 2011 in Day to day

 

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13 responses to “Jilted

  1. brian miller

    December 9, 2011 at 4:25 am

    ha this was a little playful…but perhaps the humor is the best way to deal with the angst…

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  2. claudia

    December 9, 2011 at 6:44 pm

    ugh…so she loved him once…and still does… well captured emotions here..

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  3. Victoria C. Slotto

    December 9, 2011 at 9:44 pm

    I love the voice in this one…a bit tongue-in-cheek, sarcastic even. Fun read and Brian is right. Humor is a good ointment for pain.

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  4. neelthemuse

    December 10, 2011 at 4:57 am

    Thank you Victoria:)glad it struck a chord….

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  5. neelthemuse

    December 10, 2011 at 4:58 am

    Absolutely spot on Claudia!

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  6. granbee

    December 10, 2011 at 4:12 pm

    I am laughing and applauding all at the same time! Thanks for your beady-eyed view of some of our favorite social exchanges! And the illustration reminding of the dark side of the moon was most appropriate!

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  7. morning

    December 11, 2011 at 12:29 am

    interesting voice,

    very enjoyable read.

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  8. neelthemuse

    December 11, 2011 at 6:46 am

    Thank you granbee….your encouragement means much:)

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  9. neelthemuse

    December 11, 2011 at 6:48 am

    Glad it resonated with you!

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  10. Eric

    December 12, 2011 at 6:57 pm

    Perhaps my moon shot brought to mind ‘honeymoon’? (LOL!)

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  11. neelthemuse

    December 13, 2011 at 2:59 am

    It could Eric:)….I wanted your half moon to show what a jilted lover felt…the darkened side of the moon…….

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  12. Evelyn

    December 13, 2011 at 1:07 pm

    really like your “spin” on things…

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  13. neelthemuse

    December 13, 2011 at 3:12 pm

    Thank you Evelyn…..glad it resonates with you:)

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