Envious Poem

21 Feb

I’ve been a bit wrapped up with things…..and in the process the poem has been left behind.

So an ode to all things start-up- the forays, the delays…..


You were better off not

Now you have climbed into the sun

Just a bit and burnt! Crisp.


Smiles can hide dents,

but serves you right

For ignoring me


Can you write a word now?

So full of networking you…

Can you be honest again


And natural

Like a bird wrapped up by the sky

Or a dew drop practising its final fall?


 © neelthemuse,2013





Posted by on February 21, 2013 in Day to day


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5 responses to “Envious Poem

  1. simon7banks

    February 21, 2013 at 4:38 pm

    The final line is particularly powerful, but I liked all the unexpected images.


  2. Deborah

    February 22, 2013 at 12:29 am

    a shining example of a well written poem.


  3. neelthemuse

    February 22, 2013 at 4:29 am

    Thank you Simon!


  4. neelthemuse

    February 22, 2013 at 4:30 am

    Thank you Deborah!


  5. Claire 'Word by Word'

    February 22, 2013 at 10:01 am

    Beware Icarus!



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